You helped me put it all together so elegantly

Hi Sandy,

Thank you so much! this was really your doing. Thanks  to you my application was clear and convincing, and it  looked NOTHING like the first draft I sent you.

Wharton took me in R-1 as an international with NO  business experience. You made all the parts in my  applications that I viewed as weaknesses appear as strengths, and you helped me put it all together so elegantly. It was a hard long process- but it payed  off!! Wharton — here I come!