[before] I pulled the trigger at about noon today on the application and I think that it actually turned out really well. I justed wanted to say thanks for all of the help. Your contributions made a world of difference to my essays and I think they put together a good story.
[after] I wanted to let you know that I got into HBS. Thanks so much for the help with my essays. I’m sure they made the difference from last year. Thanks again,