I was just browsing on your Cambridge Essay Service website and noticed that you provide free evaluation for HBS essays. Seeing that the leadership question has been removed for next year, which other question are you picking instead to provide free essay evaluations for. Will you be adding any other schools to that free offer? And last thing, when can we start sending you these essays?

you can start sending esasys now, but be sure to read instructions, and other amusing  stuff, and hidden extras, and freebies,  about this on the website  http://hbsguru.com/essayrater.html  . This is no stunt, it’s for real and easy,and 100’s of kids used it last year, etc. Some wrote back later to thank me for helping them get in, even tho they did not hire me. How come? Sometimes, one major suggestion, about how to shift your essay voice or change your approach, can be HUGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 to wit:

To take advantage of the free offer:

1. Paste [do not attach!!!] your draft answer of any ONE HBS400-word essay into an e-mail and send to us at sandy413@yahoo.com
2. Include the text of the question.
3. Include (i) your name, (ii) first choice school (if not HBS), (iii) a brief work and education background [in 40 words, name companies, titles, schools], (iv) GMAT score, (v) AGE and gender, (vi) have you ever applied to B schools before and what outcomes, (vii) anything special about your extra-curriculars, accomplishments, etc. (viii) and please tell us the search engine or other way you heard about Cambridge Essay Service.

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